Keryn...your blog...

So, I get the whole tell me what you think thing but I don't know what to say. I don't know the purpose of the blog and so don't know what I am suppose to be measuring it against.

It is just for posterity; rambling, ventings, and musings; ... well yeah. It makes a difference and I don't know what one I am suppose to be testing.

By the way, what is the story with your garter? I think there are more things that you can add to the list of not does on both sides but appreciate brevity. I thought you could have had a lot more fun with the heroine kick. I am personally on the opinion that brevity and succinctness (google says that is how it is written) make things funnier as long as they don't take away from the story but rather get to the point quicker. Also, depending on the audience that you are appealing to sometimes giving pseudonyms to people is not only a security kick but also a lot of fun and enjoyment.

I remind you that I am not nearly as advanced in any writing mechanisms as lets say your oldest child but he is peaking early...or at least I hope so...

Those are my thoughts without any idea regarding your audience.

Wait, were we just suppose to read the one post...well don't I feel out matched again by a 5 year old.